Monday, May 31, 2010

My 55er on love

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The cutest girl at the fair caught his eye. Making way towards her he offers her a candy. As she accepts it shyly, he peers deep into her eyes with a grin. Grabbing her neck with both his grubby hands, he smothers her with sloppy chocolate kisses. Puppy love in the Air between Babies!!




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26 comments:

  3. HI Abha,
    Thanksa ton for this 55er..
    Ur OSUM..
    jst a lil bit of error I see in the last HTML code..
    Plz check it..
    HUgs

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  4. BRAVO!!!

    Lovely short piece!!

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  5. yup cute was the word...........and it shld be.....when you kids and puppy love included...........

    loved it........

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  6. Awww...this was the cutest Love story ever between two naughty babies!!! Reminds me very much of my little 11/2 yr nephew!! :D ATB!!

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  10. such a cute photo
    with pure emotions on display. no cheapness or vulgarity in this kiss. adults learn something from these two

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  11. cute :)
    but it could be better as per 55 fiction parameters

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  12. nice one :) good luck :)

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  13. What a wonderful story :)
    Loved it!!

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  14. I was wondering whether this was about child abuse...
    pleased at the happy ending!
    cute!

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  15. I so love babies, so innocent and cute Abha... :):)

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  18. Awww!! One of the sweetest 55 fictions I've read so far. :)

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  19. Nice one. But I guess I have to agree with Mahesh's comments. Typically 55 ers pack a greater punch.

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  20. Thank you all. My mum has been ill so cant address individual comments . We worked as a team and i accept all the compliments on the team's behalf.
    @ Mahesh @ Fool....... i guess there is always room for improvement :)

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  23. Nice n Cute! All the Best! :)

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  24. That was such a cute 55-er. :) Good luck for BPL!!!

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  26. Hey Abha. haven't seen an update after this one. How is ur Mom dng?

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