Thursday, November 1, 2012

आज की रात







आज की रात
एक अनोखी रात
आज की रात
 सपनो की रात

आज की रात
 मिली मंजिलें
 आज की रात
 हुए पूरे इरादे

आज की रात
बंद डिब्बों मैं उमंगें
 आज की रात
खाली कमरों के वाडे

आज की रात
 चन्दन की सुरभि
अज की रात
दीयों की लौ

आज की रात
एक मीठा एहसास
आज की रात
एक मीठा सन्नाटा

आज की रातरात
हुए बुलंद इरादे
आज की रात
 किये पूरे सपने

आज की रात
 एक शीतल चद्दर
आज की रात
एक ठंडा झोंका

आज की रात
बेहोश चांदनी
आज की रात
वो टिमटिमाते तारे

आज  की  रात
गूंजे सन्नाटे
आज की रात
एक मधुर विश्वास

आज की रात
छोड़ी करवटें
आज की रात
वो उडते  कदम

आज की रात
 बेपनाह इंतज़ार
आज की रात
न आयेगी दोबारा

आज की रात
न  आयेगी दोबारा

6 comments:

  1. My limited Hindi makes me an excellent judge of Hindi poetry. In my scheme of things, I can read through a poem without getting stuck or doubting whether I might be wrong, and if it evokes what poetry should evoke, then it is good stuff. Enjoyed reading this poem, Abha, and the emotions of intense anticipation and hope that it evoked. Ok, now you can tell me that I got it wrong, but I still enjoyed it. :)

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    1. Thank you subhorup. Believe me, my Hindi is also limited, as i studied it only till class 7th, having shifted to Zambia after that. But poetry has always touched me, that is why i kept the name of my Blog Daffodils... from the famous poem by Wordsworth.

      As for you getting it wrong, NO!

      You got it EXACTLY right, cos this poem is all bout , in your words..... "emotions of intense anticipation and hope that it evoked".

      Thank you for that lovely comment. You made my morning :)

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  2. HI
    Excellent..Liked it ..keep it up..looking forward to read more such touching poems ....
    Regards
    Bhaik shah

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    1. Thank you Bhavik. I am so happy it touched your heart :)

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  3. Wow Aabha, what a great start! Keep at it, please. God bless.

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